I live in a consistently hot place - "each summer was the same summer", so true.. the imagery is evocative.
I enjoyed going back and forth between the same rooms or circling back to a visited room, as if the poem was building itself, felt like I could hear it being performed live.
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I live in a consistently hot place - "each summer was the same summer", so true.. the imagery is evocative.
I enjoyed going back and forth between the same rooms or circling back to a visited room, as if the poem was building itself, felt like I could hear it being performed live.
Thank you!!
Thank you so much! The pacing feeling was part of my intention so it's cool to hear that came through. Really appreciate the feedback!